Writing
Answering the Question
AP European History
Effective answers to essay questions depend in part upon a clear understanding (and execution) of the meanings of important directive words. These are words that indicate the way in which the material is to be presented. For example, if you only describe when you are asked to compare, or if you merely list causes when you have been asked to evaluate them, your responses will be less than satisfactory. An essay can only begin to be correct if it answers directly the question that is asked. The following list will help you with the meanings and applications of key terms:
Hints for Writing a DBQ
Follow these steps in approaching a DBQ:
Points to consider and remember:
Other Tips for Writing a DBQ
5. The documents are appropriately interpreted
A. If the interpretation differs from the readers’ summary sheet, then the interpretation must be reasonable
6. A sense of history is apparent
A. For example, frame of reference, different points of view, and conflicting evidence are noted
7. Proper essay style is used.
A. Grammar and spelling are adequate
B. All paragraphs have at least three sentences
C. No words given in the documents are misspelled
D. The writer has not used "you" or referred to self
E. The writer has not informed the reader as to what they will learn
F. The essay is written in past tense
8. A majority of the primary sources have been used.
A. The sources have been used in a manner which makes their use readily apparent to the reader
B. Quotations are limited to short clauses which are placed in the context of the writer’s narrative
9. The question is answered.
A. All parts of the question are noted and discussed within the narration
B. The writer does not stray from the problem
10. The conclusion summarizes the evidence, restates the thesis, and introduces a related direction for further investigation.
Words for Writing
When writing essays you can convey your message more forcefully if you use more powerful words. The first set of verbs demonstrates conviction and purpose on part of the writer. The second and third sets deal with the most common form of essay – compare/contrast. These words should become a standard part of your essay writing skills by the time you take the exam in May.
Descriptive Verbs – Asserts, Compliments, Criticizes, Demonstrates, Embraces, Exemplifies, Illustrates, Indicates, Portrays, Reflects, Reveals, Signifies, Strengthens, Symbolizes, Undermines
Compare – Agree, Also, Both/All, In addition, In common, In comparison, Shares the view, Similarly, Too
Contrast – Conversely, Differently, Disagree, However, In contrast, None, On the other hand, Unlike
Transitional phrases
The use of transitional phrases help to clarify meaning and guide the reader from point to point throughout the essay. Additionally, they provide the appearance of organization. The following are some helpful phrases:
To clarify a sequence of events: first, second, third, next, finally, last
To show a similar relationship: similarly, in like manner, likewise
To point out dissimilarity: in opposition to, in contrast to, on the other hand
To emphasize a point: indeed, in fact, surely, certainly
To show, or point out, a result: consequently, as a result, therefore, hence
To summarize a position: in summation, finally, in conclusion, in short
To illustrate a point: for example, by way of illustration, for instance
To record time: now, gradually, later, eventually, immediately, at once, at this point, next, afterward, soon, then
Note how transitional phrases affect the following paragraphs.
Lenin modified Marxism in several ways. He posited a tightly organized cadre of committed revolutionaries in place of the proletariat. He telescoped the agrarian and industrial revolutions so that they could both take place in a limited time frame. With the NEP he retreated on communism when expediency required that he make a partial regression. He was able to adapt Marxism to the unique conditions facing him in Russia. The November 1917 revolution and its success could not have been achieved without his revision.
Lenin modified Marxism in several ways. First, he posited a tightly organized cadre of committed revolutionaries in place of the proletariat. Second, he telescoped the agrarian and industrial revolutions to that they could both take place in a limited time frame. Lastly, with the NEP he retreated on communism when expediency required that he make a partial regression. In short, he was able to adapt Marxism to the unique conditions facing him in Russia. Without such adaptations, the November 1917 revolution and its success could not have been achieved.
Critical Reading Strategies
1. Understanding the structure of the text
2. Previewing the text
3. Looking for levels of meaning
4. Asking questions and predicting
5. Summarizing, evaluating, looking for the main idea